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Sunday, August 14, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Walking The Edge: Snippet #10

Hey beautiful people!

It's Sunday again... *head thump* Did we blink and the week went by? How come it's already the day for Six Sentence Sunday? Okay, I know I sound like a broken record every week, but you'll agree time does fly.

It seems like yesterday that I started sharing snippets of this unusual meeting scene in Walking The Edge (Corpus Brides: Book One) between the heroine Amelia and the hero, Gerard. But it's actually been a few consecutive weeks now...

Last week, Amelia braved danger in the face when she stood up to Gerard who had a gun aimed at her. He didn't take her sassy manner too well, telling her he'd do a lot more than point a gun at her if she didn't start giving him answers.

Like what, she wonders? Read on to see what happens next - is Amelia a daredevil, or is she unaware of the true danger a man like Gerard represents?


'... Her skin felt his heat seep into hers from the front, the cold humidity of the bricks numbing her back and buttocks - the way he leaned on her, she could feel the bulge in the front of his pants. Lord, he's getting hard!

"Danger thrills you," she said softly.

In reply, he cocked the gun and moved it closer to her face, barely an inch away. She could lick the barrel if she wanted. An image of her tongue on his bulging hard-on flitted through her mind. ...'


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From Mauritius with love,

Zee
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44 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 August 2011 at 17:59

    Wow, she's pretty tough! This line was a great contrast: 'Her skin felt his heat seep into hers from the front, the cold humidity of the bricks numbing her back and buttocks'. Nice six

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  2. Anonymous14 August 2011 at 18:23

    Whew! Love tough heroines. Can't wait to read more.

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  3. Alix14 August 2011 at 18:30

    Dangerous saucy six! Love it. Well done.

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  4. Joanne Stewart14 August 2011 at 18:38

    Wow, very evocative snippet. Sexy, dangerous. I love it.

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  5. Zee Monodee14 August 2011 at 18:41

    Yup Liz, she's one tough chick! Her daring ways amazed even me when I was writing her. :)

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  6. Zee Monodee14 August 2011 at 18:42

    Thanks Jennifer! She's tough, all right. :)

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  7. Zee Monodee14 August 2011 at 18:42

    Thanks Alix!

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  8. Zee Monodee14 August 2011 at 18:43

    Thank you Joanne!

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  9. Gem Sivad14 August 2011 at 18:50

    Uhh, I think she's focusing on the wrong gun. Love her character.

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  10. Lisa Fox14 August 2011 at 19:11

    She is a very excellent and tough lady!

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  11. sue14 August 2011 at 19:27

    guns and cocks - interesting combo

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  12. Zee Monodee14 August 2011 at 20:09

    Lol Gem - Gerard happens to be a very sexy cop, so can't really fault her for thinking of the wrong gun *grin*

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  13. Zee Monodee14 August 2011 at 20:09

    Oh yes, she is, Lisa! :)

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  14. Zee Monodee14 August 2011 at 20:10

    Lol Sue - that combination was totally unplanned when I set out to write this. Somehow, I just found Amelia thinking this when I was writing. She took me by surprise in this scene. :)

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  15. Cate Masters14 August 2011 at 20:16

    I think danger thrills her too! Love that she's taking control of the situation.

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  16. Jessica E. Subject14 August 2011 at 20:49

    They both seem to be excited by the danger. Great six! I need to read more.

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  17. Piper14 August 2011 at 20:50

    I guess there's a thin line between danger and very turned on. Wonderful six! I love a tough heroine.

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  18. Jessica Knauss14 August 2011 at 20:58

    This interrogation is taking an unusual turn!

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  19. Abby Hayes14 August 2011 at 21:12

    Great six! Love the play between the gun and his hard-on! Sounds like a great book :)

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  20. Eve Edwards14 August 2011 at 21:39

    I think they're both getting excited by the danger! Great six!

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  21. Lindsay14 August 2011 at 21:55

    Wonder what would happen to him if she did lick his gun

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  22. Bree14 August 2011 at 21:56

    A danger hard-on! Yummy!! Sexy six!

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  23. D Carney14 August 2011 at 23:06

    Nice six!

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  24. Unknown14 August 2011 at 23:07

    Loved the underlying danger with the building sexual tension! Well done!

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  25. Sandy Nachlinger15 August 2011 at 03:42

    Love the connection between the bun and the bulge in his pants. Great comparison! Either one could go off at any moment!

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  26. Anonymous15 August 2011 at 04:44

    Well I'm certainly awake now.

    Great snippet Zee!!

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  27. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:24

    Lol Cate, I think you're right. Danger is a potent aphrodisiac for these two. :)

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  28. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:25

    Thanks Jessica! I'll have more next week, the conclusion of this scene actually. :)

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  29. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:25

    Exactly, Piper - very fine line indeed. :)

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  30. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:25

    Lol Jessica - nothing quite goes as planned in this story... and this series, for that matter. :)

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  31. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:26

    Thanks Abby! I liked the parallel between the two as well. :)

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  32. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:26

    Yup Eve, the danger is turning them on.

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  33. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:26

    Lindsay! Naughty you! :)

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  34. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:27

    Lol Bree!

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  35. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:27

    Thanks Dee!

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  36. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:27

    Thanks Kathleen. I loved how the sexual tension built too in there. :)

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  37. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:28

    Lol Sandy - yes, either one could go off at any moment. Let's just hope it's not the gun. :)

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  38. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 08:28

    Lol Layna - this was better than coffee? *grin*

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  39. Anonymous15 August 2011 at 08:52

    Sass and smarts. I like it! Great six!

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  40. Elenya15 August 2011 at 13:12

    Mmm, that is sexy! I might have to go look this book up...

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  41. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 20:39

    Thanks Mirriam! :)

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  42. Zee Monodee15 August 2011 at 20:39

    Lol, thanks Elenya! I'd love it if you could get the book. :)

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  43. Jynnipher Olbert16 August 2011 at 04:34

    Sizzling six!! :)

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  44. Zee Monodee16 August 2011 at 10:02

    Thanks Jynnipher!

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