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Sunday, November 06, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Walking The Edge: Snippet #21

Hey beautiful people

It's a calm, quiet, lazy Sunday morning in Mauritius... and though I know I should laze around too, I just cannot stand the idea of peace and quiet right now.

So how do I brew up a little excitement? Six Sentence Sunday, of course! While I wait for the list to go live and the other participants' excerpts to go up, let me add mine.

Last week, we faced the question of "What would happen if they kissed?"

Well, they have kissed, and what happens now? Remember there's a sudden fire that blazed between these two in the hotel room. Gerard has thought of a woman from his past, whom he wants to forget, and the only way for him to do that is to lose himself in the moment, in Amelia.
Amelia, despite her blank memory, is trusting her heart and her dormant instincts that are guiding her, urging her to put her trust into him, because the moment is so reminiscent of the ones she is sure they have had in the past.

But, the problem remains - Gerard doesn't recognize her, and her amnesia is not helping any. Who is she really?

What happens after that kiss, after Amelia is certain that Gerard will make her finally come alive? Read on for today's six:

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Gerard groaned - her passion was enough to blow to ashes whatever remaining sense he still possessed.

She's a killer, his rational brain prodded; She isn't going to kill me now, another side retorted - in fact, he'd die if he didn't have her. Not very professional of him, he reckoned, but who gave a damn right now, because she made him think—

Stop that!

He needed to forget, to focus on the here and now, and so he released her cheek and reached down to grip the towel, peeling it off her in a rough jerk. She arched against him, and he moved forward, making her take a step back until her body was pressed to the velvet-paneled wall. ...'


Catch the rest of the Six Sunday folks here. Thanks for dropping by today, and double thanks if you leave me a comment. XOXO

From Mauritius with love,

Zee
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39 comments:

  1. Alix6 November 2011 at 11:48

    Awesome six! I'm hooked, killer..lover..fantastic ;)

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  2. Unknown6 November 2011 at 13:02

    The hero has a dilemma on his hands! Great excerpt, Zee! xoxo

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  3. Zee Monodee6 November 2011 at 14:39

    LOL! Thank you Alix! xoxo

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  4. Zee Monodee6 November 2011 at 14:40

    Exactly, Angela! And what a dilemma too, at that! :) *hugs*

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  5. Jessica E. Subject6 November 2011 at 15:27

    I know what follows! So hot! I love these characters and this book. :)

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  6. Lisa Fox6 November 2011 at 17:26

    Dangerous and sexy! Excellent six!

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  7. Sherry Gloag6 November 2011 at 19:26

    velvet panelled wall? killer? I must read more! :-) Great 6

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  8. Brenda6 November 2011 at 19:51

    Holy doodle, Zee!!! Awesome, awesome six!

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  9. E. P. Beaumont6 November 2011 at 20:42

    Edgy, yes. Adrenalin is a great drug: fight! flight! sex! exhilaration!

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  10. Zee Monodee6 November 2011 at 20:49

    Lol Jessica - who's teasing now? :) Thanks for the lovely words xoxo

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  11. Zee Monodee6 November 2011 at 20:49

    Thanks Lisa! *hugs*

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  12. Zee Monodee6 November 2011 at 20:50

    Lol, Sherry! More's coming next week, I promise :) Thanks for dropping by

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  13. Zee Monodee6 November 2011 at 20:50

    *big grin* @ Brenda. Thanks, Lady! Glad you could drop by XOXO

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  14. Siobhan Muir6 November 2011 at 20:50

    I like that he presses her up against the wall. Nice set up for what's next. Can't wait! Good six, Zee. :)

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  15. Zee Monodee6 November 2011 at 20:51

    Thanks E.P. Yes, adrenalin is a great drug, and a wonderful aphrodisiac too :)

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  16. Sandra Renee Pesso6 November 2011 at 21:06

    Sexy danger, oh Zee, you have me hooked, babe! Sensational six!

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  17. Anonymous6 November 2011 at 22:29

    Hey Zee! Love the six! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!

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  18. J.M. Blackman6 November 2011 at 22:57

    This has developed from a hot blaze to a searing forest fire. And I think there's nothing they can do escept be consumed by it. Excellent six. I love the details (especially the velvet-paneled wall)!

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  19. Graylin Fox6 November 2011 at 23:11

    A velvet wall with all that hotness. Wooo!

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  20. sue6 November 2011 at 23:11

    I liked velvet panel wall too - and she should go with her gut - such wonderful conflicts

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  21. Christine Warner6 November 2011 at 23:55

    Zee, I loved these six! The emotion and intensity and his own internal fight...you did a great job getting this all across!

    Lovely writing my friend :)

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  22. Karysa Faire7 November 2011 at 00:08

    Excellent six! His, um, *thought* process is great.

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  23. Guilie Castillo7 November 2011 at 01:57

    Aaaaah... Nice job with the dithering, the doubt. And again you've left us hanging! Can't wait for next week :)

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  24. Anonymous7 November 2011 at 04:09

    Whoa awesomely hot six! Crap that's an inferno blazing between them!

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  25. Lex Valentine7 November 2011 at 04:33

    Ah, yes! Take the towel away!

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  26. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:16

    Thanks Siobhan! Lol, yes, that's the set-up for what's to come. More next week *wink* xoxo

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  27. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:16

    Lol Sandra! I love that description - sexy danger. Definitely what's brewing between these two. :) *hugs*

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  28. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:17

    Thank you Stephanie! Hope you had a lovely weekend too :)

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  29. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:17

    Lol - thanks J.M. Yep, there's nothing they can do but be consumed by the blaze. No point fighting :)

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  30. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:18

    *grin* Graylin! Gerard is definitely a hunky piece of man meat, and with Amelia, they turn up the heat quite well. And yes, velvet! :) *hugs*

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  31. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:19

    Thanks Sue! Wow, seems like the velvet-panelled wall is a total hit! Who said details were frivolous? :) xoxo

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  32. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:20

    Aww, thanks Christine! Such lovely words - you made my week. :) *hugs*

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  33. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:20

    Lol - thanks Karysa! :)

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  34. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:21

    Thanks Guilie! I'm finding setting cliffies up to be very wicked and as addictive as SSS. I know, bad of me :) Big hugs!

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  35. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:21

    Lol. Thank you Mirriam! The heat is definitely flaring now :) xoxo

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  36. Zee Monodee7 November 2011 at 08:22

    Exactly, Lex - he just had to take that skimpy nuisance of the towel out of the way. :) *hugs*

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  37. Anonymous7 November 2011 at 09:48

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  38. JoAnne Kenrick7 November 2011 at 17:47

    yup...move that towel LOL Fab six, Zee, as always

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  39. Zee Monodee13 November 2011 at 10:07

    Thanks JoAnne! Sorry my reply is so late, I just saw your comment after a week of being buried in edits. XOXO

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