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Sunday, November 20, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Walking The Edge: Snippet #23

Hey beautiful people

It's a pleasant but bittersweet Sunday morning for me right now - as I was putting this post together, I learned one of my uncles just passed away after a lengthy struggle against cancer. It's news that hits home even more given that I'm a cancer survivor too, and he and I actually went in together one day at the hospital, back to back, to see our oncologist.

I'm saddened, and the news left me reeling... but life goes on anyhow, and we all gotta do what we gotta do to move along.

So I'd already signed up for Six Sentence Sunday, and I didn't want to leave anyone in the lurch (and also not put up my link up when I signed up, which to me, amounts to giving my word).

Last week, we were in that hotel room in Marseille, this couple in total lust against the velvet-panelled wall. Heat flared up, fast. Will they follow upon this fire that blazed... give in to their desire for one another...? Read on for today's six:


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Bracing his hands on her ribcage, he pinned her to the wall. She understood what he wanted, and in the blink of an eye, her legs came up, brushing feverishly against his hips, then straddling his waist. Standing like that, his body aligned with her core, and with a none-too-gentle push, he swiftly entered her.

Even with her face buried in the crook of his collarbone, he heard the moan she tried to stifle. Her soft, velvety lips trailed up his skin to settle on the pulse beating frantically in his neck. Her tongue darted out to caress the throbbing vein, and she rocked her lower body against his. ...'


Thanks for coming over, and double thanks if you leave me a comment. You know these little words you leave me tide me into the week, right? :)

Don't forget to check out the other Six Sunday posters here - I guarantee there are some amazing reads in that list.

Hope you're all having a lovely Sunday.

From Mauritius with love,

Zee
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51 comments:

  1. Alix20 November 2011 at 09:40

    'Her soft, velvety lips trailed ..' beautifully written six!

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  2. Jessica E. Subject20 November 2011 at 15:39

    Sorry to hear about your uncle. Hugs

    A HOT six! Well, the entire story is hot and a great adventure. :)

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  3. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 16:52

    Thanks Alix. :)

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  4. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 16:53

    And thank you, Jessica, aka this story's No1 fan :) xoxo

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  5. Taryn Kincaid20 November 2011 at 18:14

    So sorry for your loss.

    Nicely steamy six; like how in tune with each other they are.

    (And thank you for recognizing who Aidon & Stef are based on!)

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  6. Rebecca Royce20 November 2011 at 18:20

    Z-SO sorry for your loss. Thank you for these 6. Great writing.

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  7. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 18:26

    Thanks Taryn.

    Yup, these two are definitely two lovers reuniting, hence why they're in tune. :)

    I love that storyline you're pursuing - can't wait to see how you'll write it xoxo

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  8. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 18:26

    Thanks Rebecca :) Nice to have you over

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  9. Graylin Fox20 November 2011 at 18:41

    My condolences honey. You have my shoulder any time you need it.

    And now, O.O Hot scene!

    Graylin

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  10. Lisa Fox20 November 2011 at 18:46

    I'm so sorry for your loss.

    I love your very HOT six!

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  11. Cherie Marks20 November 2011 at 19:01

    Really sorry to hear about your uncle. {{Big Hug}}

    Loving this six! Very sensual.

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  12. Gem Sivad20 November 2011 at 19:19

    Zee, sorry to hear about your uncle. Your six this week is sexxxxy, though.

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  13. Layna Pimentel20 November 2011 at 19:25

    I sorry for you loss hon! ((hugs))

    Wonderful six, though. Super hot!

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  14. Jessica Knauss20 November 2011 at 19:32

    Beautifully written scene, just restrained enough. You're quite a trooper to post after such news. My condolences. Take care.

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  15. sue20 November 2011 at 19:34

    I can see and feel this scene, so well done.
    My uncle died last year - just as we were getting closer too. My sympathies to you (and huge hugs)

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  16. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 20:26

    Thanks Graylin. I guess we all don't realise yet that he's no longer with us... Sad

    Glad you liked the scene though :)

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  17. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 20:27

    Thank you, Cherie *hug back*

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  18. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 20:27

    Thanks, Gem. Yep, sexy 6, innit? :)

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  19. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 20:27

    And thank you, Layna. :)

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  20. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 20:28

    Thanks Jessica. I admit I debated whether to post, but I know the right thing, the real tribute, would be to get on with life. :)

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  21. Zee Monodee20 November 2011 at 20:30

    Thank you, Sue. I know what you mean - we were starting to get close too, our common brush with cancer putting us together beyond that line that only patients cross. Hugs back :)

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  22. Siobhan Muir20 November 2011 at 22:21

    Oh, Zee, blessings to you and your family. Thank you for coming through on your word. Your six was smokin' and loved that they were too far gone to deal with foreplay. Well done. :)

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  23. Misa Buckley20 November 2011 at 22:28

    Sizzling!

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  24. Jayel Kaye20 November 2011 at 23:16

    My heartfelt condolances for your loss and you are right... life and writing does go on.

    I enjoyed the six, keep writing on.

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  25. Sarah Ballance20 November 2011 at 23:37

    Zee, I am so sorry for your loss, and what a bond the two of you must have had. I almost feel guilty commenting on your six, but i will tell you, girl, it's HOT. ((hugs)))

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  26. Lex Valentine20 November 2011 at 23:38

    I like him more and more with each of your posts!

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  27. Aimee Laine20 November 2011 at 23:48

    And we pretty much can picture what happens next! ;) LOL

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  28. Guilie Castillo21 November 2011 at 01:24

    Zee, how lovely! And the beautiful way you described her mouth on his throat--masterful, sweetheart.

    I'm so sorry about the bad news you received today. I send you a tight and long ciber-hug.

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  29. Unknown21 November 2011 at 02:11

    HOT! Very, very hot.

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  30. Anonymous21 November 2011 at 02:58

    Hot and intense six! Great imagery here :)

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  31. J.M. Blackman21 November 2011 at 03:02

    Evening, Zee. I'm sorry to hear about your uncle. I just lost mine a few months ago. It says a lot about you that you still put together your post and took the time to comment on others; and as always, your six is wonderfully written and easy to sink into. Sweet, sensual and simple. Great six.

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  32. Tmonique21 November 2011 at 03:57

    Whew!! Got me all hot and bothered! Loved it

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  33. Anonymous21 November 2011 at 06:40

    Dayyuuummm...that's HOT, Zee! I love it! Can't wait for next week! Happy Sunday!

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  34. christine warner21 November 2011 at 07:02

    You never disappoint Zee...very sensual and sexy..loved your six :)

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  35. Vivien Dean21 November 2011 at 07:50

    So very sensual! Well done!

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  36. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:03

    Thanks Siobhan. :) Yup, too far gone indeed.

    Glad I went through with the posting - grown addicted to SSS *hugs*

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  37. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:03

    Thanks Misa :)

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  38. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:03

    Thank you, Jayel :)

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  39. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:04

    *grin* Sarah. Yes, it was a unique bond, and I'll cherish that always.

    Glad you liked the six :) xo

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  40. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:04

    Lol Lex - he's very 'likable' :)

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  41. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:05

    Lol Aimee - indeed! The scene concludes next week :)

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  42. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:06

    Thank you, Guilie. Hugs back

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  43. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:06

    Thanks Krystal :)

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  44. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:07

    Thank you Mirriam. Glad you liked it :)

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  45. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:08

    Jalisa, sorry for your loss too. That kinda resonates all through you, innit?

    Glad you enjoyed the excerpt. :) Hugs

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  46. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:08

    Thanks Tmonique. Nice to see you over here :)

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  47. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:09

    Lol. Thanks Stephanie. The scene concludes next week, so stay tuned for that 'ending' :)

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  48. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:09

    Awww, thank you Christine *hugs*

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  49. Zee Monodee21 November 2011 at 08:10

    Thanks Vivien :)

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  50. Unknown22 November 2011 at 18:52

    So sorry about your loss, Zee. It is never easy to face these challenges in life.

    But these six certainly make up for that. They are smokin'!!! Hot and passionate - very evocative. Well done as always, sister xoxo

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  51. Zee Monodee24 November 2011 at 18:36

    Thanks Angela *hugs*

    Glad you could come over, sweetie. XOXO

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