tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post1188456710482379190..comments2024-02-11T20:56:33.087+04:00Comments on Zee Monodee: Six Sentence Sunday - Walking The Edge: Snippet #8Zee Monodeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-51313642555889111852011-08-02T18:55:10.886+04:002011-08-02T18:55:10.886+04:00Ooh, such tension! Great snippet!Ooh, such tension! Great snippet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-52646185931598422572011-08-02T09:36:29.600+04:002011-08-02T09:36:29.600+04:00Thanks 1000th Monkey - good catches! My eyes gloss...Thanks 1000th Monkey - good catches! My eyes glossed over these. :)<br />Will be sad to miss you, but enjoy your break. xoxoZee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-33749333514625613752011-08-01T20:11:15.438+04:002011-08-01T20:11:15.438+04:00Very nice action! You could probably take out the ...Very nice action! You could probably take out the word *solid* from the first line, as it's kind of already implied, and (being dyslexic, these things really jump out at me), i found it distracting that you used *pain* twice :)<br /><br />I'll be very sorry to miss the next couple weeks while I'm away :)1000th.monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16835988128285459745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-71506668716705970382011-08-01T08:09:53.514+04:002011-08-01T08:09:53.514+04:00Thanks Sandy. I always admit it wasn't an easy...Thanks Sandy. I always admit it wasn't an easy scene to write because I had to get the pace, the action, and the emotion right. Glad if all these came through though. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-65674948519787551952011-08-01T08:09:04.373+04:002011-08-01T08:09:04.373+04:00Thanks Stacey!Thanks Stacey!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-18308915299207096502011-08-01T08:08:53.338+04:002011-08-01T08:08:53.338+04:00Thanks E.P. Yeah, the pace is fast and furious in ...Thanks E.P. Yeah, the pace is fast and furious in this one. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-89061561905662291862011-08-01T08:08:28.744+04:002011-08-01T08:08:28.744+04:00Tension indeed, Lindsay. :)Tension indeed, Lindsay. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-67500208297404872382011-08-01T08:08:11.260+04:002011-08-01T08:08:11.260+04:00Thanks Lisa! Glad it had that effect. :DThanks Lisa! Glad it had that effect. :DZee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-72420899901672287222011-08-01T08:07:51.005+04:002011-08-01T08:07:51.005+04:00Thank you Jessica!Thank you Jessica!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-33838611779598518022011-08-01T08:07:35.473+04:002011-08-01T08:07:35.473+04:00Lol Taryn!Lol Taryn!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-67472435401196165082011-08-01T08:07:21.502+04:002011-08-01T08:07:21.502+04:00Thanks Jayel! Yup, it is an intense scene - wasn&#...Thanks Jayel! Yup, it is an intense scene - wasn't a piece of cake writing this one. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-12077960474410206532011-08-01T08:06:45.242+04:002011-08-01T08:06:45.242+04:00Lol Jessica! Stay tuned for more next week. :)Lol Jessica! Stay tuned for more next week. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-86479196214775834122011-08-01T05:51:43.787+04:002011-08-01T05:51:43.787+04:00Great description with lots of tension. I feel her...Great description with lots of tension. I feel her pain.Sandy Nachlingerhttp://iousex.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-87107633884818948872011-08-01T04:23:33.826+04:002011-08-01T04:23:33.826+04:00Oooo dangerous! I'm lovin' this!!Oooo dangerous! I'm lovin' this!!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17327832955749311651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-23781141676258730792011-08-01T03:10:48.964+04:002011-08-01T03:10:48.964+04:00Whoa... gets scary and violent fast!Whoa... gets scary and violent fast!E. P. Beaumonthttp://epbeaumont.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-21125072772962739412011-08-01T02:58:32.026+04:002011-08-01T02:58:32.026+04:00Love the tension going on here.Love the tension going on here.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-5306877602042132862011-08-01T00:28:26.791+04:002011-08-01T00:28:26.791+04:00Wow! So intense it took my breath away!Wow! So intense it took my breath away!Lisa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249215936412244450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-61442340441196147782011-07-31T22:02:14.916+04:002011-07-31T22:02:14.916+04:00Wow, I could feel myself right in the moment. Well...Wow, I could feel myself right in the moment. Well done!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-75857754674296707512011-07-31T21:51:45.345+04:002011-07-31T21:51:45.345+04:00Wow! Action!Wow! Action!Taryn Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130206764352777367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-25250656798346184392011-07-31T21:41:59.870+04:002011-07-31T21:41:59.870+04:00Wow. Now that was mega intense.Wow. Now that was mega intense.Jayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-12462939824233293802011-07-31T21:37:27.466+04:002011-07-31T21:37:27.466+04:00Eek! How will she get out of this one?Eek! How will she get out of this one?Jessica Knausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049731983377756203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-70247672758942192622011-07-31T21:28:27.470+04:002011-07-31T21:28:27.470+04:00Lol Graylin! :)Lol Graylin! :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-20345126728608058122011-07-31T21:17:29.339+04:002011-07-31T21:17:29.339+04:00Yep, you are going to kill a section of my bank ac...Yep, you are going to kill a section of my bank account.Graylin Foxhttp://www.graylinfox.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-74230111711982034202011-07-31T20:13:08.789+04:002011-07-31T20:13:08.789+04:00Thank you Liz!Thank you Liz!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-81591725728299402252011-07-31T20:12:56.180+04:002011-07-31T20:12:56.180+04:00And thanks Gem! Glad the edgy feeling came through...And thanks Gem! Glad the edgy feeling came through. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.com