tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post8678656501499340985..comments2024-02-11T20:56:33.087+04:00Comments on Zee Monodee: Six Sentence SundayZee Monodeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-51105775661347195822011-05-23T19:34:45.987+04:002011-05-23T19:34:45.987+04:00Thanks Jayel!Thanks Jayel!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-81227436490859398072011-05-23T17:37:17.496+04:002011-05-23T17:37:17.496+04:00Excellent show of emotion. Very powerfulExcellent show of emotion. Very powerfulJayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-84802836551349817942011-05-23T10:17:09.058+04:002011-05-23T10:17:09.058+04:00Thank you Sarah!Thank you Sarah!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-14905883875001594882011-05-23T10:16:50.536+04:002011-05-23T10:16:50.536+04:00Yes, Lindsay - torment indeed. :)Yes, Lindsay - torment indeed. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-90769746280666398232011-05-23T10:16:24.768+04:002011-05-23T10:16:24.768+04:00Jessica, I kept wondering how a man, a total Alpha...Jessica, I kept wondering how a man, a total Alpha, would react and it seemed to me he'd reel bu then pull himself together right away. That's what I wanted to push through, glad if it came across. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-3726349077620712502011-05-23T10:15:15.149+04:002011-05-23T10:15:15.149+04:00Thanks Marie!Thanks Marie!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-2963602626482483792011-05-23T03:05:38.619+04:002011-05-23T03:05:38.619+04:00Great combination of grief and anger! Well done!Great combination of grief and anger! Well done!Sarah Grimmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03737049126767567901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-1072528977436084242011-05-23T02:16:03.854+04:002011-05-23T02:16:03.854+04:00Very emotional. Torment.Very emotional. Torment.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-57158714514374813622011-05-22T22:40:33.261+04:002011-05-22T22:40:33.261+04:00He's angry and in pain, but also sure of himse...He's angry and in pain, but also sure of himself, thinking what the other person should be feeling. A very strong character. I think I would be more disoriented than anything. Nice snippet.Jessica Knausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049731983377756203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-23549283670208596902011-05-22T21:10:05.619+04:002011-05-22T21:10:05.619+04:00Oh, great six!Oh, great six!Marie Deeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02227521965829153174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-15528880765749000272011-05-22T21:03:59.985+04:002011-05-22T21:03:59.985+04:00Thank you, Kim!Thank you, Kim!Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-24190681512951015502011-05-22T20:59:00.724+04:002011-05-22T20:59:00.724+04:00His pain is almost visible. I can feel it. Great s...His pain is almost visible. I can feel it. Great six!Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06481162819559141780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-3119386277469124692011-05-22T20:21:44.975+04:002011-05-22T20:21:44.975+04:00Thnaks Annie! Glad all that came across. :)Thnaks Annie! Glad all that came across. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-88085959567098798022011-05-22T20:06:30.867+04:002011-05-22T20:06:30.867+04:00Wonderful emotion. I could feel his pain and anger...Wonderful emotion. I could feel his pain and anger.Annie Nicholashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06016425791073062800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-22914186484441826192011-05-22T19:53:04.028+04:002011-05-22T19:53:04.028+04:00Exactly, Taryn! He has every right to be angry rig...Exactly, Taryn! He has every right to be angry right now. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-33916550731288694342011-05-22T19:52:24.010+04:002011-05-22T19:52:24.010+04:00Aww, thanks Cate! I admit I reeled when I wrote th...Aww, thanks Cate! I admit I reeled when I wrote this, because it hurt to be in his shoes. I'm glad he sounds 'real' though.Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-62055976062698313532011-05-22T19:41:12.041+04:002011-05-22T19:41:12.041+04:00Intense emotions. And he has a right to them!Intense emotions. And he has a right to them!Taryn Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130206764352777367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-8065551225182498852011-05-22T19:40:14.264+04:002011-05-22T19:40:14.264+04:00Emotion-packed snippet! You make us feel his sense...Emotion-packed snippet! You make us feel his sense of deep loss almost too well.Cate Mastershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01371792447604980848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-74611708300731480742011-05-22T19:27:59.870+04:002011-05-22T19:27:59.870+04:00Glad you could catch that, Cherie! Thanks.Glad you could catch that, Cherie! Thanks.Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-84555492684361752162011-05-22T19:14:16.665+04:002011-05-22T19:14:16.665+04:00Thanks Gem. I kept wondering what anyone would fee...Thanks Gem. I kept wondering what anyone would feel like if in his shoes - to know you have a child, only to see her snatched before you just as you're about to grab her. I thought he should be quite shaken with grief and anger.Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-55049604316215729662011-05-22T19:13:04.448+04:002011-05-22T19:13:04.448+04:00Thanks Liia. Glad if they rang powerful. :)Thanks Liia. Glad if they rang powerful. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-65401171132317785432011-05-22T19:12:18.079+04:002011-05-22T19:12:18.079+04:00Thank you Lisa! I was striving for emotional. :)Thank you Lisa! I was striving for emotional. :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-12323390341793632302011-05-22T19:11:54.136+04:002011-05-22T19:11:54.136+04:00Intense emotion. Very visual. I can feel his ang...Intense emotion. Very visual. I can feel his anger. Great SSS.Cherie Markshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09251826824735524360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-16611467597989102322011-05-22T19:11:50.460+04:002011-05-22T19:11:50.460+04:00Thanks Viviane! I wanted his grief to come through...Thanks Viviane! I wanted his grief to come through.Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4522107760074588948.post-17499707944263454562011-05-22T17:42:17.823+04:002011-05-22T17:42:17.823+04:00I can understand--grief and anger mixed together. ...I can understand--grief and anger mixed together. Wow, well done.Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.com