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Sunday, April 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hey peeps

For a while now, I've been following this bandwagon where authors post six sentences of their WIP on Sundays. If I'm not mistaken, Six Sentence Sunday just celebrated its first anniversary. I thought this was a cool idea, to have a little tidbit up every week, so you guys get to see what we're working on.

Here's mine, and please bear in mind this is my first time at this so I'll prolly mess it all up. *grins*

The following lines are taken from my current WIP, a contemporary romance, and happen at Chapter 3, where the heroine is looking at the hero while they're together in a car.

Enjoy!

"...He had lost all traces of youth.
Had he lost his heart too? Right then he didn’t look human. No – he was the real avenging, fallen angel now. So beautiful it hurt. What had happened to him, to the boy she’d known, who had made her believe there was beauty in the human soul?..."

Let me know what you think! :)

From Mauritius with love,

Zee
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18 comments:

  1. Rebecca Royce24 April 2011 at 17:01

    Such beautiful writing. It just brought tears to my eyes!

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  2. Zee Monodee24 April 2011 at 18:02

    Aww, thank you Rebecca!

    Big hugs

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  3. Cate Masters24 April 2011 at 19:01

    Poignant and lovely - especially loved "so beautiful it hurt". Great snippet Zee.

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  4. Anonymous24 April 2011 at 19:56

    Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Your six was wonderful!

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  5. Vegetarian Cannibal24 April 2011 at 20:22

    I liked it.

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  6. Zee Monodee24 April 2011 at 20:27

    Thanks Cate. I was really into the zone when I wrote that, it must be. :)

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  7. Zee Monodee24 April 2011 at 20:27

    Thanks Sarah! It felt really good to post this up. Hopefully, this Six Sentence Sunday is the start of many more to come. :)

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  8. Zee Monodee24 April 2011 at 20:28

    Thank you, Vegeratiran Cannibal. What a name, lol. :)

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  9. Lindsay24 April 2011 at 22:43

    First welcome to SSS. Love the inner thoughts. Give us more.

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  10. Taryn Kincaid25 April 2011 at 00:06

    Nice! Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. Great debut. Poignant stuff.

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  11. Susanna Fraser25 April 2011 at 02:08

    Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday--lovely, lyrical six sentences!

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  12. Zee Monodee25 April 2011 at 10:17

    Thank you Lindsay! This has been an amazing experience so far and I hope to have more up next week.

    Cheers!

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  13. Zee Monodee25 April 2011 at 10:18

    Thanks Taryn! Lol, started SSS with a bang, eh? I was hoping so, well, hoping I wouldn't do a botched job. :)

    Cheers!

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  14. Zee Monodee25 April 2011 at 10:18

    Thank you Susanna! I was really into my heroine's head when I wrote this bit.

    Cheers!

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  15. Catch My Words26 April 2011 at 02:32

    Great job! I like the description.

    Joyce
    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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  16. Jayel Kaye26 April 2011 at 03:28

    WElcome to 6 sunday. Great post. I like your style

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  17. Zee Monodee26 April 2011 at 16:43

    Thanks Joyce! Glad you liked these little words.

    Cheers!

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  18. Zee Monodee26 April 2011 at 16:43

    Thanks Jayel. What a pretty name you have. :)

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