Sunday, May 22, 2011
Six Sentence Sunday
If you wanna read them, check out the Six Sunday link here.
Now, today's tidbit... Remember last week, when Kelsey dropped the second bombshell, informing Stellan that the daughter he never knew he had was gone now?
Well, in the past weeks, I posted lines of dialogue. I thought I'd go back deep inside today, into what Stellan is feeling at the news.
So that the following six make sense, here's the setup: Stellan has stepped away from Kelsey, gone to the sideboard where crystal decanters are placed, and in the maelstrom of emotion swirling inside him, has taken one decanter and slammed it on the floor.
"...Kelsey flinched when the crystal shattered. She flinched. His eyes narrowed, so he saw her only through a thin slit of focus while his features hurt, contorting with anger and agony.
She should be suffering, feeling her insides tearing apart like his were ripping right now. Everything in his being felt like it was being pulled off, slammed back together with herculean force, and pulled apart again. Again and again and again..."
That's mine for today, folks! Hope you enjoyed. :)
From Mauritius with love,
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Very emotional six. I can feel his torment.
I agree, very emotional!
Wow, they're some powerful words
I can understand--grief and anger mixed together. Wow, well done.
Thanks Viviane! I wanted his grief to come through.
Intense emotion. Very visual. I can feel his anger. Great SSS.
Thank you Lisa! I was striving for emotional. :)
Thanks Liia. Glad if they rang powerful. :)
Thanks Gem. I kept wondering what anyone would feel like if in his shoes - to know you have a child, only to see her snatched before you just as you're about to grab her. I thought he should be quite shaken with grief and anger.
Glad you could catch that, Cherie! Thanks.
Emotion-packed snippet! You make us feel his sense of deep loss almost too well.
Intense emotions. And he has a right to them!
Aww, thanks Cate! I admit I reeled when I wrote this, because it hurt to be in his shoes. I'm glad he sounds 'real' though.
Exactly, Taryn! He has every right to be angry right now. :)
Wonderful emotion. I could feel his pain and anger.
Thnaks Annie! Glad all that came across. :)
His pain is almost visible. I can feel it. Great six!
Thank you, Kim!
Oh, great six!
He's angry and in pain, but also sure of himself, thinking what the other person should be feeling. A very strong character. I think I would be more disoriented than anything. Nice snippet.
Very emotional. Torment.
Great combination of grief and anger! Well done!
Jessica, I kept wondering how a man, a total Alpha, would react and it seemed to me he'd reel bu then pull himself together right away. That's what I wanted to push through, glad if it came across. :)
Yes, Lindsay - torment indeed. :)
Thank you Sarah!
Excellent show of emotion. Very powerful
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